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^^ I think it's good, you're defiantly improving. I think the only thing that bugs me would be the text, it doesnt seem to match to well and seems to throw it off of balance- meh but that's probably just me. And maybe try a thinner boarder, just to see what it looks like.
How the C4D(s) are placed seems pretty good, it looks good without it covering alot of Deidara.
Good job~
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