[poem] Let me Die (?)

[Hazu]

Stab me in the heart and let me die
Where I fall on the floor let me lie
My blood has stained your hands
My memory has stained your mind

You can't run from what you've done
Can't deny that you have come
To see my tears
my blood my death
My life is ended
My eyes are blank
I see no future, only the past.

When we hugged when we kissed
when you held me in your arms
and promised me forever.

Your arms are no longer around me
Your arms are no longer my haven
The place I once felt warm and safe in
Now bring me shivers and death.

The hands that once held me
now let me fall
the knife, your words, that you weild, has stabbed me in the heart.

Just let me bleed, just let me cry.
It's time for this love to die.

thats a nice poem =D

[Yami]

Fix the your D:

*steels it for fanfic*

Oh wait, Hazuzuzuzuzuuuuuu can I use it for a fanficcy?

*is being legal* :3

[Flowersss]

VERY nice poem. Very depressing, yet thats the good part of it.

[Kaidela]

I love it. :3 But...

Can't deny that you have come

Your arms are no longer around me
Your arms are no longer my haven

Love ya Hazu. xD <3

[Hazu]

T^T Kay i finally fixed it.... It was like 5 min till i had to head to school last time I was on XD
</3



O: and Sure yamiiiiiiiiiii if i get to read it....



^^ Thanks Flowersss and Dare~~







(i iz not a depressing perosn btw D: )

[Yami]

Hazu is actually a happy person. She just likes to stab people with her arrows and throw them off cliffs O_O

And I sooooo have 3 sentences done already =]

Edit: And I call Aleese as my grammar/spelling checking whoar

[Hazu]

o.o lol -wants to read et-

[Leesa]

Woah zuzu :O That seems like the victims point of view from my poem XD